Author Testimonials for Jesse
5 stars. Please extend my thanks to Jesse. She was honest and kind. Her comments and feedback were so helpful and I will definitely use them to make the story much better.
—V.P. Evans, author of The Rebirth
—V.P. Evans, author of The Rebirth
5 stars. Jesse went above and beyond with her carefully though-out responses. Her feedback will definitely help me improve the story. Thank you!
—Beau Derque, author of Cheddar the Cat
—Beau Derque, author of Cheddar the Cat
4 stars. I was very pleased with the work Jesse did. It was exactly what I had hoped for when looking for a beta reader. It was not a rough edit or a thorough summary, nor should it have been. She read the novel and critiqued it based upon character development, voice, narrative arc, style, and flow. For the price of beta reading, what more could one expect? I was very happy with her comments and suggestions. She was able to pick up, with amazing accuracy, subtle foreshadowing early in the manuscript—most encouraging. One highlight for me arose in her comment of the title of the book. She suggested that perhaps I consider a title based upon The Boy Who Cried Wolf, a metaphor subtly eluded to a few times throughout the novel. What she could never have known is that until only a few weeks before I submitted They Flutter Behind You, the title of the book had been The Boy Who Never Cried Wolf. And now I have to rethink the title. Very well done, Jesse. Thank you very much.
—Brian Douglas, author of They Flutter Behind You
5 stars. Jesse's feedback was superb. She delved into the motivations of my protagonist, caught tense errors, and paid attention to even the very minor inconsistencies that could cause me to lose the reader. She raised questions about the necessity of a couple minor characters and events and offered good streamlining suggestions.
—Eli Abernathy, author of Cubicles Anonymous
—Eli Abernathy, author of Cubicles Anonymous